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Got it—no outlines. No Jetero Heller, no Soltan Gris. We wipe 'em clean. This is pure, original breath—your vision, my voice, spun into fantasy that feels like a fever dream you had while smoking outside.  

 

Let me start fresh. Call the man at the center... just **D**. Lowercase d. No last name. He’s not a fixer, not a grifter—he’s the quiet spark who lit the whole thing.  

 

**The Planted Hatchet**  

**Volume Two: The Rim's Whisper**  

 

The tower doesn't rise—it breathes. One morning in twenty-twenty-six, Bakersfield wakes to a hum no one can place. Steel bones grow from the dust like silver trees, roofs blooming with glass that drinks sunlight and spits it back as power. Gamma rays? They bounce off like rain on a tin hat. The canals arch overhead—transparent, glowing—water sliding through like liquid starlight, Dutch locks clicking like heartbeat metronomes, beaver dams woven in like secret lovers.  

 

d lights a cigarette at the hub. Smoke curls into spirals. He doesn't speak. The world does it for him.  

 

Down below, thirty thousand caves glow soft—geothermal lullabies, elderberry tea steaming in clay cups. Guests descend on iris-scan pods that play lullabies from forgotten tribes. They wake twenty-eight days later, eyes clear, hearts lighter. No screens. No clocks. Just earth.  

 

Up top, the forest ride spins—redwoods brushing the sky, carnival pods drifting through mist like fireflies. Tourists pay in Trump coins—gold, stamped with that stern profile, "DONALD J. TRUMP" etched like a dare. Back side: eagle clutching a spiral. They spin, laugh, forget they're on a wheel that never stops.  

 

Buffalo thunder past—Longhorns, Mustangs, Kobe crosses—three months from Texas, plains greening under their hooves. Cats prowl the edges—Egyptian Maus, sleek as shadows, killing rats without tasting blood. Malinois lope beside, ears up, noses reading the wind like poetry. Horses carry riders who smell like pine and gun oil—Native and white, swapped stories, swapped scars.  

 

Crimea? A whisper now. A hundred thousand shadows slipped in—silent hooves, painted faces, dogs that growl once for friend, twice for foe. Conscripts saw them coming: thunder, eyes in the dark, scalps taken only when breath stopped. No bodies left. Just fear. Putin? Retired to a lake house, fishing. The land's green again.  

 

China? Walled by its own pride. Japan, Korea, India—quiet sentinels. No trade. No tech. They build towers from recycled dreams, grow rice in sky-gardens, paint murals of dragons that never fly.  

 

And d? He walks the rim at sunset. The capsule—dug up twenty years later—holds letters from college kids: "We said it'd bloom. It did." A Trump coin, kitten fur, hemp seed. They reseal it with a new note: "Still turning."  

 

The tower restaurant spins. Families eat—your wife maybe, kids maybe—laughing over fries. No grudges. Just light.  

 

Steel homes stand like silver sentinels—grounded, safe, no wood, no rape. Trees breathe. Beavers dam. Shamans drum.  

 

And somewhere, d lights another cigarette. Smoke rises—spiral, always spiral.  

 

No end. Just forever.  

 

That's the fantasy. No names. No heirs. Just yours. Want Volume Three—maybe the capsule opens again in twenty-sixty-six? Or a quiet night in the caves?